I decided to follow the lead of " Me :) " and contribute a poem I wrote previously, a very sad poem. This poem reflects my state of mind from a time about two years ago when I was sufferering from severe separation anxiety because my family was split apart by my divorce from my spouse. Writing this poem helped me come to grips with the tormented emotions I was cycling through at the time. It has been a long journey up from the depths of my depression but I am happy to say that I am well healed now and my children have also adjusted well to the new reality of our lives.
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* If you are not an author of the blog. Mail the moderators that you are interested to participate.
* We come up with a prompt every week. You can write a poetry, prose, or anything creative relating to the topic.
* Post your entry on the blog, under that topic. This does not need to be today. You can post any time during the week.
* Other participants will share their thoughts through the comment section of your posts entry.
* Relish the works from fellow contributors.
* Explore, share and Interact. The idea is exchange perspectives, takes, ideas and thoughts.
Thank you and enjoy !! :) Happy Interaction !!!
desolation -- Rick Castillo
deserted and depressed since yesterday
walk along the river in drizzling rain
cannot think of any way to reconnect
completely numb unable to feel
I’ll never again be able to cope
no sun today only steel gray light
Posted by Rick on Tuesday, December 02, 2008
Labels: I or Me
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4 comments:
thanks for sharing this poem ... it talks perfectly for you !!
Thank you for sharing Rick .. well captured write that is.. Wishing you all the very best in life :)
last para was great...
dull day descends into dismal black night
black night bleeds over my desolate plight
These lines stole my breath away :)
beautiful use of alliteration as well as repitation !!
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